tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8553788475588887731.post2553009841045828209..comments2024-03-21T01:21:39.467-07:00Comments on A Place to Call Home: story number twoAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02413779674486557422noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8553788475588887731.post-26382168676854745402013-09-10T15:55:29.059-07:002013-09-10T15:55:29.059-07:00Ok... two people like it. That's good enough ...Ok... two people like it. That's good enough for me. I'll finish this one for sure ^-^ Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02413779674486557422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8553788475588887731.post-84670514200887593832013-09-10T02:17:15.134-07:002013-09-10T02:17:15.134-07:00<3<3Viviane Schwarzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03577169765332833910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8553788475588887731.post-34567355587368028272013-09-05T02:39:35.356-07:002013-09-05T02:39:35.356-07:00Aha, it's probably quite clear anyway, and me ...Aha, it's probably quite clear anyway, and me that's muddled...Joel Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06385448853109051880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8553788475588887731.post-35674415846567014102013-09-04T05:11:05.272-07:002013-09-04T05:11:05.272-07:00A bit of both I think. I inserted a line of dialo...A bit of both I think. I inserted a line of dialogue with him saying 'two birds, one stone' in a later script... ^-^Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02413779674486557422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8553788475588887731.post-8273854205815595672013-09-04T02:23:39.108-07:002013-09-04T02:23:39.108-07:00Brilliant. And great to see what came before. I di...Brilliant. And great to see what came before. I did get a bit confused about the motivation in the table bit. I wasn't sure if Punch was fending off a desire to eat the boy, since it was lunchtime and there was a boy on his table, or just needing him out of the way.Joel Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06385448853109051880noreply@blogger.com